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Simon Dgutshe - first draft by JohnSu Simon Dgutshe - first draft by JohnSu
This is what I started with for


The main character was a little different in appearance and in story. In this draft, Simon had this thing I called "Hypnosis Eye" which he got from his father. His father was a notorious thief who used the Hypnosis Eye to aid him in his crimes. When people look into the Eye, for a while they will see only what they expect to see. Useful if you know how to play with peoples' expectations, but less reliable if you don't know when to use it. This picture shows him running from a pair of officers who thought he was kind of suspicious looking.

The perspective was fun, as was the cartoony feel of everything. In the end I abandoned this one as I couldn't figure out where they actually were; is this an alley? A street? Where's the sidewalk? I could not execute the rest of the background, and I wasn't satisfied with how the officers looked.

Simon's last name is actually pronounced "Joot-shee," and his name as a whole was supposed to be a play on "saiminjutsushi" (hypnotist). I kept his name in the deviation, but dropped the explanation as he no longer had the Hypnosis Eye.

Comparing Simon's faces, I kind of like how this one doesn't look like Hei, but I also like how the other one looks more competent and less weird.
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Gin-Kusanagi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I WAS RIGHT
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DivineInterventions Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
The girl in the suitcase must really be getting jostled around.
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starlightgenie Featured By Owner May 20, 2010   Traditional Artist
It looks to me that they've entered an empty tunnel.
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JohnSu Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I can see how the curved building makes it look like that
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yuroran Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I wonder how the girl inside the suitcase can actually breathe, being that it's locked?

That aside, I think this style looks really fun. :XD:
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kaede-kit Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
Heheh, his expression xD
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I-am-ato Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
Ack! the ties a different color!
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JohnSu Featured By Owner May 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
surprise!
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RosePaintedRed Featured By Owner May 16, 2010  Student General Artist
It must suck for the lil' woman in the suitcase for chases...and this thought didn't come to me until I saw this version
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invisible-chan Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
I love the cartoony-ness of this drawing. =D I see that the men in your gallery are starting to catch up to your women.
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